#8sunday May 17 , 2015 Scott’s Story 7

It’s Weekend Writing Warriors time again. This is my submission.

These are the next few lines to one of my (as yet untitled) works in progress. I have extended the sentence count to nine for this snippet.

#8sunday May 17 , 2015 Scott’s Story 7

The space port was modest. A single storey thermablock shell less than a klick long. The landscape was bleak. A series of deeply crested red dunes dwarfed the dull grey hangars. The ground hops parked along the walls looked like so many mechanical insects, all neatly lined up. She was met at the counter by a grey-suited corporate.

Citizen Orida, I am Aurice,” her grey eyes and steel grey hair were offset against starkly black skin. “I have been tasked with taking you to the Facility and settling you in. I will ensure your immediate needs have been met.”

The previous 8 sentence snippets of this story can be found here.

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12 thoughts on “#8sunday May 17 , 2015 Scott’s Story 7

  1. Sparse but vivid details. I don’t know what’s happening yet, but I know that being a fly on this wall…. is likely to get me killed in the decontamination process.

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  2. Outstanding worldbuilding, Kim! I liked the futuristic/alien terminology, and the descriptions put me right into the scene. Nicely done!

    No post for me this week. Just making my rounds and seeing what’s new in the stories. Have a good week. 🙂

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