Greetings, Weekend Writing Warriors! These are the last sentences in my contemporary short story about a woman who chooses to even the score.
Marian undergoes a secret, 8 month long physical transformation in preparation for one event – one night: the Advertising Industry Annual Awards Event where the well-heeled and well-connected rubbed shoulders with the business-rich and ad-world-famous. As runner up to the Winning Ad Campaign, in a move which causes some surprise, she arranges to introduce the Winner (Andrea Williams), on stage, in front of everyone who is anyone in the Industry. Unrecognisably sexy and polished she meets her arch-nemesis on stage Todd Eccleston – her boss, and the architect of her misery, who is suitably taken with her transformation. After her speech, she introduces a video of the winning advertisement, and takes a limousine to the airport while everyone watches … to the very, very, very end.
In the hall, the advert had reached its last line.
“Chlontiran. Quality of life back in your hands.”
The screen flickered, and cleared.
The applause died down, as the larger than life figures of Tod Eccleston and Andrea Williams, entered a well-appointed office, in an unmistakably intimate embrace.
“It’s settled then? That lump of lard, Diamond, is out of the running?” Her voice was heavy with lust. “Yes, sexy, sweet Andrea, you get the award…”
The room erupted.
© Kim Magennis 2016
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That was definitely worth the wait! Sweet, sweet revenge. Love it!
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Thank you Joyce, so glad you liked it!
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Wow. I was not expecting that! Great snippet.
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Thank you Chelle!
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Truly just desserts! Bravo, Marian!
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Ouch! I think she did what she set out to do. Very satisfying.
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Aha! The denouement. Good one!
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Thank you Aurora
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“Lump of lard” had me chuckling. Fun little snippet.
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Thank you!
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OK, wow, always pays to sit through the credits to the very end all right. Seems she got her fitting revenge in fine style! Great snippet.
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Thank you, Veronica
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Ha! Well that’s certainly going to turn some tides! Love the premise of this story.
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Thank you, Rose!
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Boom! Yes! Best served cold, indeed. Great job, Kim.
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Thank you Nancy!
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Hell hath no fury… I loved it! I loved that she plotted and planned for this over such a long time. I hope the revenge was sweet for her.
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Thank you Rachel. Extremely sweet
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Ooh, the fallout from that should be exciting–and no one can yell at her, because she’s already gone! Hopefully she’s moving on to something special, now that she’s had her revenge.
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Thanks Caitlin. That is a whole different story!
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The great thing with stories like this is that the rest of it lives in your head. 🙂
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Great ending! I love that you leave some details to readers’ imagination, like how the “stars” in that little scene at the end reacted to seeing that right up there. Thanks for sharing that story with us.
~ Marcia
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Thank you, Marcia. It was something different for me. I sincerely believe in leaving lots of space for imagination. The balance of how much, however, is a challenge
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I’m guessing she’s not going back to work for Todd. Lol. Great revenge!
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Thank you, Cara
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BAM! Everyone saw it was all rigged by those two vipers forAndrea to get it. Good ending!
History Sleuth’s Mysteries
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Thank you. Its just as well that I am not divine. There would be a whole heap more retribution in this world 😉
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Haha- excellent revenge indeed! A satisfying ending.
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Thank you, Christina. I am glad you enjoyed it. I was hoping it would be satisfying for the reader.
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She deserves her award and he deserves – nothing!
Tweeted.
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Thank you, Daryl. Much appreciated
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I like “her voice was heavy with lust”. Looks like Andrea is the one that truly deserves the award.
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Thank you, Frank. Well, everyone now knows how she ‘earned’ it!
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Yes they do!
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Revenge is sweet! Great excerpt, Kim!
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Thanks Steven
It would be nice if we could manipulate life like that.
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Gangsters always say revenge on a cold plate is twice as sweet. I’m not one of them but I like the way the saying tastes as you do. Good job, Kim
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Thank you, Charmaine. I love that saying!
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Very cool! I love how she “zinged” him. It sounds like she grows a lot through her story journey.
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Thank you, Bonnie. She does indeed
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Yikes! Obviously not something either one of them wanted anyone to see. Sounds like great revenge. I really enjoyed this story! 🙂
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Thank you, Jessica, much appreciated!
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Good story. I like seeing the bad guys get theirs in the end. And it’s a double win for Marion. Look how she’s changed her life. She gets even with them, too. Nicely done, Kim!
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😉 thanks Teresa, it is nice when it works out that way!
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I’m not sure how she managed her revenge, but I bet it tastes good, even if it is refrigerated.
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Laughing, indeed Ed.
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Oh, my. Seems like Marian might get some satisfaction after all. Great snippet, Kim.
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Thank you Paula
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