Greetings, Weekend Writing Warriors! I am dusting off (another) WIP with the working title: Annie’s Song. The next few weeks I will share from a passage which has been written from the POV of Gravais, the captain of a faster-than-light scientific starship ship, which is transporting a new Team which has been assigned by the FOSB (Federation of Sentient Beings) to study a newly discovered planet.
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The dimensions of the Starship were slightly off. Like the designing committee could not quite agree on the set of biometrics that were to be accommodated. The rooms and passages were broad and high ceilinged, but all the consoles, controls and readout panels were set oddly low on the dull grey walls.
Captain Gravais surveyed his small kingdom with satisfaction. His recently roused Navigator and Engineer were taking care of business on the bridge and he was on his way to supervise the awakening of his passengers from SpaceSleep.
They had arrived together on the shuttle from Federation Headquarters nearly eight decades ago, and had travelled together in suspended animation. At the cryotanks, he checked the life support monitors, and keyed in the reanimation codes.
Erit na Rakh was the first to recover.
© Kim Magennis
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Wow, this is going to be quite an adventure. I guess they don’t mind never seeing anyone back home again…or they live very long lives back home now too, since they slept so long just one way… Interesting snippet!
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I will share their back stories after this series. Thank you for dropping by, Elizabeth
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That’s exciting, coming in right at the start of the mission. I wonder what their state of mind will be like after a long cryo-sleep.
Marcia
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80 years? Wherever they’re going it’s will be very different. Great snippet!
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I’m already intrigued. After eighty years of sleep, the travelers are going to be strangers where ever they’ve landed.
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Love all the details you sprinkled into this excerpt! We’re certainly in for an exciting adventure here! 🙂
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I am already intrigued, Kim! Maybe I missed it–is this a short, or is it a novel? 🙂
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Thank you Teresa. So far it is “just another fragment” waiting to see what it will become. Its about 2000 words so far.
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80 years? Wow. And I bet they never even stopped for washroom breaks.
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Lol
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You know what they need? Adjustable consoles. 🙂 Or, you know, go with something that’s inconvenient for everyone. Whatever works.
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I think they were aiming for the latter 🙂
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Was there reason for the odd design? I liked the crisp description of the ship and introduction to the travelers.
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Thank you, Aurora
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Your world building is wonderful. Everything is so crisp and clear.
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Thank you, Cara. Much appreciated
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Good snippet, loved the compromises that had been made to the design, which you can guess don’t work well for anybody LOL.
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Absolutely. Maximum inconvenience for all
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I especially enjoyed the description of the rooms and ship in general. It sets the scene right away. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you, Whitney
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Sounds like the start of an interesting adventure. Great details!
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Thank you, Christina
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Yes, reminded me of Alien. A great snippet. Eight decades of suspended animation? I would hope that science has also worked out how to make us all remain looking 21, or waking up and looking 80 is not so appealing. Intriguing story.
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Thank you Rachel
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Beautiful piece. Thank you.
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Thank you, Charmaine
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I love the descriptions! Looking forward to finding out more about them – particularly this Erit. I can’t help but think there’s a reason he’s the first to come round.
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Thank you, Karen, for dropping by. Much appreciated
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Intriguing snippet. I can’t help wondering about the odd dimensions. There must be a reason behind that…
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Very interesting world and situation to be dropped in to. Looking forward to reading more.
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The fact that the passengers had been in deep sleep for almost 80 years took me aback. What a different world they’re going to wake up to. And it took them that long to get from their home planet to this new planet? Mind-boggling. Great descriptions and an intriguing start to this work.
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Great descriptions. I wonder if the two different heights seemingly being accomodated has something to do with some kind of clas structure?
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Thank you, Chelle, an excellent suggestion.
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You’ve got my attention! So very intriguing! Great description, and I’m fascinated with the idea of cryotanks used for long space flights.
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Hmmm what will happen next? Engaging Kim ☺
Evoking scenes from alien with the cryotank, and we know how that turned out.
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😝Oh the possibilities! Thank you for stopping by, much appreciated!
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