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This week I continue to share from my WIP with the working title: Annie’s Song which has been written from the point of view of Gravais, the captain of a faster-than-light scientific starship ship, which is transporting a new Team which has been assigned by the FOSB (Federation of Sentient Beings) to study a newly discovered planet.
Gravais has released the Team from SpaceSleep and we start from where we left of last week: Erit na Rakh was the first to recover. Then it was the incorrigible Olwen Anstelholm. We continue with Olwen speaking.
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“Hey, Erit, you good?” She nodded her wedge shaped head in acknowledgement. “I am.”
Anuritha kha Illicg was last. As *ge sat drinking, *gir vestigal wings gingerly stretched. The translucent webbing sparkled in the artificial light of the recovery room, casting dappled reflections on the dull grey walls. “We are running to schedule?”
“We have entered orbit around planet IJ5397. It is 08.09 on 148.18769 as scheduled.”
(*Anuritha kha Illicg is neither male not female, and the pronouns used refer to this state.)
© Kim Magennis
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I love the pronouns! And the names. Not to mention the premise. I’m hooked!
I had to go back and read all of these. I’m so glad I did !
Welcome to the ranks of the self-employed, Kim. You are absolutely a writer, and you definitely have a voice people want to read!
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Thank you, Shan. Your encouragement is much appreciated. The universe (source, or God or whatever or whoever you call it) kicked me in the pants. I hope to soar a bit… and not crash and burn too soon. :-}
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Sometimes we need that little kick in the britches. And I’m not fussy about terminology, although I do like the Vulcan – Kaiidth (“What is, is).
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Kaiidth it is! :-]
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Sounds like an interesting-looking species. Love the description woven in. 🙂
That is a lot of numbers really close together!
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Your description of the characters is fantastic.
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I can see these characters so well, especially Olwen. He sounds like a fun character. I love sci-fi that presents characters of varying genders. We can’t expect all aliens to have male/female analogs. Nicely done.
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Beautiful description in so few words. I want to read more, Kim!
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I am amazed by your world-building. I definitely want to read more.
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Each character is more interesting than the lost. Love the world you are creating.
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Fascinating – I love your character creation here, and the descriptions too. Can’t wait to read more.
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I love the different aliens!
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Intriguing and I love the description of its wings.
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Interesting world building, I like it. 🙂
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This is awesome! I really like how you give shape to the characters in just a couple of words. 🙂
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Definitely feel as if I’m in another reality, which is a good thing! Effective snippet 🙂
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The true adventure is about to begin… Can’t wait to read more.
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This crew becomes more interesting by the snippet!
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Love the translucent wings. I can sense a lot of interesting back story as well as front story emanating from this crew.
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What a wonderful imagination you have, Kim. Writing about the future, or an imaginary life form, would be completely beyond me. Great writing.
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Thank you, Rachel. The funny thing is, they write themselves. I am just glad I am at the key board when they arrive 😉
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I wonder if they will get safe passage or end up battling for survival. They’ve been in sleep-state for a while so a lot could have changed.
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Everything is running to schedule so far. I am intrigued with what they are heading into though.
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I wish I was with them. On the other hand I need a motion sickness pill just to get into the bathtub.
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Lol
I guess a few centuries from now motion sickness won’t be a problem for travellers. It would have been bred or engineered out of existence.
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I suspect all hell will break loose when they arrived.
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Before I read your post, I studied the picture a bit. I sure didn’t think those land masses looked like anything on Earth, and after reading, I see I’ was right.
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Interesting! I wonder if everything will run as smoothly as the reawakenings did.
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I like how you work the descriptions in here. Great snippet
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Thank you, Fallon
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Another fine story, Kim. Thank you.
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Thank you Charmaine, you are very kind
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