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Welcome to another installment of ‘Falling into that New Career’.
Daniel is not your normal hero. In fact, very far from it. Inopportunely rescued from a suicide attempt (by a 2 second admin error), he is plunged into an alternate reality, where he is supposed to be an already deceased ‘specimen’. Fortunately the workers overseeing his ‘collection’ were less than eager to change his status to that required by their paperwork, and he finds himself ‘relocated’. The only problem is, the Multiverse is a pretty big place, and he did not get returned to Earth.
His story continues in this second chapter (Falling into that New Career) of Lab Rat (this is the working title only) where he finds himself in the Alien Immigration Offices, having to complete ‘paperwork’ with his case worker Zith Grewnfarn.
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“What is your vocation? Do you have any skills or technical training, Daniel?”
“Door-to-door vacuum salesman. Retired.” The acid in his tone surprised even Daniel. But, given the circumstances, he felt entirely justified.
He blushed when he remembered how naively proud he had been when the cameraman had been assigned to him for that fateful day. He had put on his game face and had played his best ever pitches. He was so hot, he smoked. Deal after deal, signed, sealed, delivered.
Kim Magennis
(Apologies for the creative punctuation)
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Love his sarcasm. You do a great job dribbling pieces of backstory. No info dumps here.
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That second line is fantastic! Great writing!
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Oh…vaccums you say? I might be needing me one of those. I do wonder what happened with that cameraman. Great snippet! 🙂
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I love how we get information about Daniel’s past (leading up to his near-demise) bit by bit.
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This really makes me like him. He should be proud to be good at what he does.
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I could buy his wares. Great snippet
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Great snippet. I want to know more about him.
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Now I’m wondering what the heck the cameraman was for. Something a little shady, clearly, if he ended up ‘retired.’ Nice way to keep us guessing!
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It sounds as if he had been a good salesman. What happened?
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Hell, I’m ready to buy a vacuum from him now! lol. Great work, Kim!
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Sounds like Daniel was quite the salesman. I wonder if that has anything to do with his current situation?
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This story has the best twists and turns. I enjoyed his pride in the ability to sell vacuums. Great snippet!
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Great snip, leaves me wanting to get to know him better.
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Thank you, Angelica
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The cameraman sounds like someone was gathering evidence on him for some nefarious purpose. But yes, I guess I would have asked if a cameraman suddenly showed up to go to work with me. Great snippet!
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I liked the pace of the snippet and the creative punctuation was wonderful. Tweeted.
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Thank you, Daryl 😄
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Dynamite! I love the fast and furious so full of past experience. Your writing is marvelous.
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Thank you, Charmaine
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I’m intrigued as to why he would have had a cameraman. Great job dribbling in the enticing details.
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Thanks Cara. Unfortunately, Daniel did not think to ask….
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Great snippet. I want to know more.
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Thank you Rachel
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What was he selling? I’m buying. Nice job, Kim!
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Thank you, Nancy
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I want to know what happened next!!
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Thank you Fallon
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Too short! I never want your snippets to end, Kim!!
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Thank you, Teresa!
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If only we had door-to-door sales people like that. The ones that come to our door now are just scam artists trying to get money by scaring naive people. Fab snippet! 🙂
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Thank you, Jessica
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