Greetings, Weekend Writing Warriors!
After a rather longer than expected hiatus, I am back. I wish I could say that I spent the time laying down lots of magical words, but I would be lying. I found I needed to spend my time and energy on survival rather than my art. But, the written word is a forgiving lover and here I am.
I have selected a short-short story to share from my growing collection of pieces that I plan to publish – one day, in the not too distant future. It is called: Farmer
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Harvest was always a bittersweet time for H’rald. Contemplating the results of a full growing season was inclined to both gratify and humble him. Looking at his latest crop, neatly stacked in a mere five stasis crates, it occurred to him that it was a paltry return for the expense of yet another year of his precious life force.
Admittedly, the early days of uncertainty intrinsic to Farming had been mitigated by the innovations that New Science had brought, but it still was a personally expensive way to contribute to the Greater Good.
As much as he loathed it, he knew he reeked of obsequious anxiety when the Crop Committee arrived to collect his offering. It was only when all the paperwork had been completed and stamped, and they had expressed their corporate satisfaction, that he was able to look at their official valuation: Fifty thousand galactic credits. H’rald only realised then that he had been holding his breath.
He was safe from the Debt Hounds for another year, with enough to get the highest quality seed for the new season. And enough to let his field lie fallow for the optimum fifty days. Even enough to get the best fertiliser for the transplanting of his precious seedlings.
©Kim Magennis 2017
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Welcome back! Great snippet. It feels as something bad is lurking in the shadows waiting to happen.
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Thank you Elyzabeth. Next week is the last part, so all will be revealed then.
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Nice start Kim. I missed last week, but had to backtrack so I didn’t miss out on your incredible storytelling! Now, on to this week’s. 🙂
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I grew up on a farm and your alien world seems very familiar to me. The cost of seed, the taxes due, the tremendous work involved for an unpredictable outcome. Well done.
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Thank you, Gem. It certainly can be a very hard life . I can see how it doesn’t make sense to non-farmers.
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Sounds like a hard life. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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Just how hard becomes aparent at the end only. Thank you, for dropping by Kimberly.
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Love the world-building here. 😀
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Thank you, Amy. Much appreciated.
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“Debt Hounds” sound ominous. I wonder what happens if you don’t have enough money… Farming is tough at the best of times, and this sounds even tougher.
Welcome back!
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Thank you, Caitlin. Interesting thought. In another reality they could be literally monstrous. In this, their danger lies in entrapment.
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Welcome back, Kim. We all need breaks to get ourselves back into routines. This piece is intriguing. You’ve explained the currency by what it can buy instead of what it’s worth in our world. Good job. Now for the other shoe to fall.
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Thank you, Diane. That is the question, isn’t it? What value do we put on our lives, and how does it compare to what we settle for?
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As a real life farmer, I have total empathy with H’rald. The words and sentiments ring very true – even if they are far into the future. Great snippet, and good to see you back.
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Thank you, Rachel. I am so glad you feel that way. It is a very special calling.
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I loved this. I’m sure farmers really do think this way no matter where they are.
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Thank you Elaine. It is what I imagine the more passionate farmers to feel.
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Welcome back!
And thanks for the glimpse into another world of farming.
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Thank you Aurora. This certainly is very other worldy farming.
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Glad to see you’ve returned. My critical skills don’t always run to comments, but I enjoy reading your snips.
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Thank you, Amelia. That pleases me, no end.
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Seems like a really good outcome for him, but I have the feeling there’ll be a fly in the buttermilk soon. Loved the flow of the snippet and the ‘voice’. Left me wanting to read more for sure!
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Sounds like the future is bright. Why do I sense a whopping great “BUT” just around the corner?
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All I can say is SPLENDID! Wait, there’s more. Fascinating and oh so moving, this Farmer World you’ve created.
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Thank you, Charming Charmaine 😉 Much appreciated.
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Welcome back! I had to take a survival break too so I get it. This snippet has an ominous tone; farming doesn’t sound at all bucolic in this world.
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Thank you, Alexis. Yep, life happens, and it can take a lot to keep treading those rising waters ;-). I hope my conclusion still surprises…
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Glad you’re back! I just know something is going to go wrong very soon. Source: grew up on a farm. 🙂
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Lol. You are of amazon stock, I bow to you and your forebears and intuition. Farming is not for sissies. Or people who love their comfort.
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I am pretty much a sissy. So I will never go back to farming. 🙂
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Welcome back. Fantastic snippet. Time off got your writing batteries charged.
Tweeted.
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Thanks, Daryl. The stories did not abandon me, for which I am ver grateful. And some have lingered long enough for me to remember them, to get them down.
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Great to have you back, Kim! His passion for farming comes across so clearly in the final paragraph. The thinks he thinks of buying with his hard earned credits mostly have to do with his future crop. Loved the feeling of this. Do we find out what the crop is?
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Thank you Jenna, we most certainly do find out more about his crop. Farming is his life. Glad that came across.
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Has a distinct dystopian feel. Reminds me of 1984 & Brave New World.
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Thank you, Cara. Those were good books. One man’s heaven can be is another man’s hell – and vice versa
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Welcome back! Hope everything is well with you now.
Great descriptive snippet!
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Thank you, Fallon. Things are a lot better! I can’t wait to catch up on what I have missed these last few weeks.
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I love the hints of the world in this snippet! So intriguing! 🙂
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Thank you Jessica, I hope this world is going to stimulate some thinking! This is a short piece – only 500 words, so all will be revealed in a mere three weeks.
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Welcome back, Kim. We missed you. This snippet is a great example of how something as simple as capital letters can change the feel of a passage. All these capitalized entities feel like forces of nature poised to swoop down on your hero.
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Thank you, Ed. I am glad that came across. I am very visual, so I always read a lot into the way words look on a page. I am very glad to be back!
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