Greetings, Weekend Writing Warriors!
This is the second part of a three-part short story shared from my growing collection of pieces. It is called: Farmer. Complete, it consists of 500 words.
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Ten days into fallow, H’rald ordered and paid for his new seed. It arrived, by courier, in its special anti-contamination container, with its Certificates of Authenticity and all its New Science Guarantees.
Preparing and loading the seed trays was his favourite part of the process. Each tiny pearl was gently inserted deep into the rooting compound, with a single drop of precious Ichor, and then the trays were placed under the germination lamps.
His daily visits to the germination chamber were, to him, his most sacred pilgrimage. As H’rald watched the tiny nubs of life crest through the golden rooting crystals, he had been cultivating his field. By the time the seedlings were ready for transplant, it was in prime condition.
©Kim Magennis 2017
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Definitely different, definitely cool. The magic of life!
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Thank you Caitlin
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Always love your world building! 😀
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Thank yo Amy
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This was a lovely excerpt.
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Thank you, Elaine
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I am so intrigued. This doesn’t sound like my dad’s kind of farming. I can hardly wait to read the end!
Please publish an anthology of your short stories!
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Thank you, Teresa. I have compiled a modest anthology which I have shared with two of my closest friends. My aim is to add to it until there are a few more pages worth.
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The details are so beautifully presented! Loved the snippet…
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Thank you, Veronica. 500 words doesn’t give you a lot of time to get much across. I am glad you are enjoying it. Hope you like the ending, next week
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Let me guess – the “seeds” won’t grow into normal plants.
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All will be revealed, next week Aurora. Thanks for stopping by
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There is something very powerful in planting seeds and watching them grow into plants. I find gardening to be very therapeutic and relaxing. A great description of his planting process.
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Thank you, Rachel. I think so too.
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This bit says so much about your characters and how much he loves his job.
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I like how you say his daily visits became almost a sacred pilgrimage. Nice use of word imagery.
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Thank you, Sue!
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Marvelous word pictures here. I still can’t help feeling you’re setting things up to all go horribly wrong. Is that just a sign of a twisted mind?
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Laughing. No, Ian. Just a good writer’s mind.
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Memories of incredible gardens planted with my young children on my back, husband wheeling a barrow filled with nourishment, seeds, and bulbs. No instant flowers like today. Kim, thanks for the thoughtful way you write. So beautiful.
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Thank you, Charmaine. A garden is a precious place. I am glad you have such awesome memories
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I thought your use of the word Ichor very interesting. I thought I knew what it meant, but looked it up anyway. Very interesting three definitions. I wonder which one this resembles as it’s how he’s feeding the seeds. Wonderful descriptions!
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Thank you, Jenna. Well caught. You can decide next week!
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Can’t wait! 🙂
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What a wonderful intimate look to celebrate the simple in a truly beautiful way. Nice job, Kim!
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Thank you, Nancy. My short stories have become, I now discover, an experiment in mindfulness. I am glad you read that into so few words.
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Your picture in words makes me want to go out and plant a garden but spring is still hiding from us this year. Great snippet.
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Sprng will come soon, Gem. Those seeds are calling 😉
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Very interesting.
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Thank you Fallon
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Fascinating snippet. You conveyed how precious those plants are to him and the wonder he feels watching the seeds grow. Very nice.
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Thank you Diane, glad you enjoyed it.
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Wonderful world building in this snippet! I like the excitement of watching the new life grow.
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Thank you, Jessica. It is quite like watching magic unfold.
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This brought back memories of my “Five acres and freedom” days, when I had this huge garden. Growing food was fun.
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I have always found watching seeds I have planted germinate to be curiously empowering. Like I am part of the mystery of the emergence of life 🙂
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