#8sunday 17/05/07 Rewired 03

Greetings, Weekend Writing Warriors! 

First a word of thanks for your visits and comments last week. I had technical issues and found that a number of my likes and comments did not post, including my responses. My apologies, I did visit everyone and enjoyed your snippets immensely.

Next, a comment about my character’s first name. Amahle /aˈmaːɬe/ is a Zulu name, and means “the beautiful one, the prettiest, the finest”. The ‘hl’ sound in Zulu has no English equivalent and a lot of phonetic approximations render it as similar to ‘shl’ (as in ‘schlep’). To make the sound correctly, you place your tongue just behind your front teeth, as if you are going to say ‘l’ (as in ‘lemon’), and instead of voicing the ‘l’ sound, you breathe out the ‘h’ (as in  ‘hot’), whilst holding your tongue in the slightly curved shape of ‘l’. Have fun trying it out. Amahle ,  can be broken down into three syllables the short ‘uh’ (using the ‘u’ in ‘up’), a longer ‘mu’ (as in ‘mud’) and the ‘hle’ with the ‘e’  from ‘let’. Uh- mu- hle.

For the rules of engagement and submissions of my awesome Wewriwa fellows, please click on the icon below!

The head of the multidisciplinary team dealing with her case had called her into his award-embellished office, shortly after that.

Well Dr Lusinga – Amahle – it would appear that your condition is settling. Our observations over the last few months have allowed us to reach a unanimous agreement to release you.” Dr Narang shifted in his chair. “You will be able to function normally as a human, but sadly for humankind, your career in quantum engineering is over. Fortunately the patents from your engine and the royalties from your research have set you up for life. After a statutory period of 12 months, the curators of your trust will return control of your financial affairs over to you. Should you keep your record clean, and should you continue to function at your current cognitive levels, you will be free to live your days out with comfort and security.”

©Kim Magennis 2017

Thanks for stopping by and please visit the other talented Weekend Writing Warriors. Click on the logo below to go to the website.

wewriwa banner


35 thoughts on “#8sunday 17/05/07 Rewired 03

  1. I do feel sorry for her. Seems like she’s lost a lot–her profession, control of her money. Will she ever regain what she lost? And how did she lose it? As others have pointed out, lots of questions here! Intriguing as always, Kim. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Life is never so simple as that!
    It’s got to be terrible to have had all those skills–and responsibility–and be treated like a child. On the other hand, cognitive impairment could possibly lead to some bad choices, so they probably have her best interests in mind.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. I can’t help but wonder what happened to her; it feels like someone or something took control of her at one point- or still is!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Amhle was a highly functioning human, so maybe nothing inherently (endogenously?) wrong with her. But something/someone has decided to use her for something else.


  4. Hmm, so what did inventing this engine do to her mind? And what is the cold engine? Oh my, the questions…the questions… 🙂

    As always, enjoying your writing, Kim!


  5. Both good and bad news in those results. Regardless, it has to be hard for Amahle to adjust. Great snippet!


    1. Thank you, Jessica. Her ego is also being affected, so she is not as pained by some aspects of her loss. She instinctively knows she will survive, but in what form?


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s