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First a word of thanks for your visits and comments last week. I had technical issues and found that a number of my likes and comments did not post, including my responses. My apologies, I did visit everyone and enjoyed your snippets immensely.
Next, a comment about my character’s first name. Amahle /aˈmaːɬe/ is a Zulu name, and means “the beautiful one, the prettiest, the finest”. The ‘hl’ sound in Zulu has no English equivalent and a lot of phonetic approximations render it as similar to ‘shl’ (as in ‘schlep’). To make the sound correctly, you place your tongue just behind your front teeth, as if you are going to say ‘l’ (as in ‘lemon’), and instead of voicing the ‘l’ sound, you breathe out the ‘h’ (as in ‘hot’), whilst holding your tongue in the slightly curved shape of ‘l’. Have fun trying it out. Amahle , can be broken down into three syllables the short ‘uh’ (using the ‘u’ in ‘up’), a longer ‘mu’ (as in ‘mud’) and the ‘hle’ with the ‘e’ from ‘let’. Uh- mu- hle.
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The head of the multidisciplinary team dealing with her case had called her into his award-embellished office, shortly after that.
“Well Dr Lusinga – Amahle – it would appear that your condition is settling. Our observations over the last few months have allowed us to reach a unanimous agreement to release you.” Dr Narang shifted in his chair. “You will be able to function normally as a human, but sadly for humankind, your career in quantum engineering is over. Fortunately the patents from your engine and the royalties from your research have set you up for life. After a statutory period of 12 months, the curators of your trust will return control of your financial affairs over to you. Should you keep your record clean, and should you continue to function at your current cognitive levels, you will be free to live your days out with comfort and security.”
©Kim Magennis 2017
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I’m picking the next twelves months ain’t gonna be easy, but I got to wonder, what’ll happen if she doesn’t continue to function at her current cognitive level?
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I love snippets that make me ask questions. This one certainly does. Some red flags raised here.
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I had no luck with the pronunciation! Wonder what live will be like for her now?
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Congratulations on packing so many question raising bits of information into one short paragraph. This is very intriguing. Can’t wait to find out what the heck is going on.
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So there’s a probationary period. A lot can happen in a year.
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So she still has to go through a probationary period. A lot can happen in twelve months.
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What an intriguing excerpt – it raised so many questions in my mind, and I want to know more!
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Oh, what, now? I don’t think anything is going to happen along the lines of what Amahle expects, or her lecturer expects. Curious to see what is next.
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I do feel sorry for her. Seems like she’s lost a lot–her profession, control of her money. Will she ever regain what she lost? And how did she lose it? As others have pointed out, lots of questions here! Intriguing as always, Kim. 🙂
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Life is never so simple as that!
It’s got to be terrible to have had all those skills–and responsibility–and be treated like a child. On the other hand, cognitive impairment could possibly lead to some bad choices, so they probably have her best interests in mind.
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Intriguing and as you noted above, where would the fun be if her life did play out so smoothly? The person talking to her makes me suspicious just from his tone! Very well done excerpt!
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Hm, why do I have a feeling her life isn’t going to play out as expected?
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You made me smile, Christina. Of course it isn’t. But where would the fun be, if it did?
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What an intriguing snippet. Really looking forward to learning more about this highly trained engineer, and finding out what has happened to her.
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Thank you Rachel
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Definitely raises some questions. Great snippet
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Thank you, Fallon!
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Why does this all sound like not a very good thing for her? A bureaucratic kiss off, I’m thinking? Very intrigued.
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Thank you, Nancy.
Most scientists hate the unexplainable!
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12 months before she has control of her money? I suspect some people will try to ensure she loses it.
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Thank you, Aurora. There does always seem to be that special someone, doesn’t there?
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Call the cops. She’s in big trouble for such a brilliant woman. Fascinating writing, Kim.
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Thank you, Charmaine. Much appreciated
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I can’t help but wonder what happened to her; it feels like someone or something took control of her at one point- or still is!
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Thank you, Jake. That is an excellent question, one I am hoping will provide some entertainment unravelling!
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Wow, I’m wondering what happened to her. The pronunciation of her name makes my head spin.
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Sorry,Cara!
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So many questions! Can’t wait to read more!
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Thank you, Elyzabeth
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She’s been rewired? You’ve really got me wondering what was wrong with her.
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Amhle was a highly functioning human, so maybe nothing inherently (endogenously?) wrong with her. But something/someone has decided to use her for something else.
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Hmm, so what did inventing this engine do to her mind? And what is the cold engine? Oh my, the questions…the questions… 🙂
As always, enjoying your writing, Kim!
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Thank you, Teresa. I love that thought, I shall dwell on it. In this version, it had more to do with how her brain was already wired.
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Both good and bad news in those results. Regardless, it has to be hard for Amahle to adjust. Great snippet!
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Thank you, Jessica. Her ego is also being affected, so she is not as pained by some aspects of her loss. She instinctively knows she will survive, but in what form?
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