Greetings, Weekend Writing Warriors! These are the next 10 sentences in my contemporary short story about a woman who chooses to even the score. Marian’s story continues with her meeting Todd Eccleston on the stage.
Todd’s eyes widened when he saw her. She smiled, and he responded with the lazy, sexy smile he usually saved for his next conquest. He offered her his hand, and drew her intimately against his side, behind the glass and chrome podium.
“I have great pleasure in introducing to you Marian Diamond, this year’s most worthy runner-up.”
The applause was polite.
She paused, as he walked off the stage.
“Good evening, ladies and gentlemen.” Her voice had always been her best feature, clear and musical. Her words carried effortlessly through the hall.
“It is with great honour, this evening, that I introduce to you the 2015 winner of the Best Campaign Award.”
© Kim Magennis 2016
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Oh, you evil little tease! Sunday needs to hurry and get here again! 🙂
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Thank you Joyce🌹
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So much tension! You’re an expert at building it up. Great writing!
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Thank you Amy. Now I just have to live up to it!
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You’re a cruel author to leave us dangling. I can’t wait to see what she says.
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Thank you Elaine! 😉
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You’ve got me wondering what kind of campaign. And what’s the important of Todd Eccleston?
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Todd was revealed earlier as her boss. As was this being an awards evening for a large Advertising Agency.
She picked her moment very carefully 8 long months before the event.
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Love the set up here.
I want to know what she’ll say now that she has the stage. 🙂
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Thank you, Karen. Yes indeed. It is a chance in a lifetime to get even.
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Oh my! Not there, you can’t end it there! lol. You are a master of writing suspense, Kim! Wonderful snippet!
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Thank you, Teresa. Just a happy coincidence that the sentences end when they do 😉 But I am hoping this one keeps you ’til the last line.
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She certainly got his attention, which in turn gets mine…but WHO IS THE WINNER?! LOL. More suspense leaving me on the edge of my seat. 🙂
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NO! The snippet ended too soon – I’m on the edge of my chair waiting to see what she’s going to say and do, in that fabulous dress. Seriously, very effective, heightened the tension nicely and I enjoyed the excerpt, even if I desperately need more.
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Thank you, Veronica. More next week, I promise.
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Well, she’s caught his eye! This makes me wonder if she has plans to use her audience to speak her mind, or if her plans are more long term.
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She did indeed, Caitlin. The audience definitely comes into it!
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Great set-up. I’m waiting for the hammer to fall. 🙂
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Thank you, Dani. It will, that’s for sure!
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Fabulous line – he responded with the lazy, sexy smile he usually saved for his next conquest – defines his character.
Tweeted.
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Thank you, Victoria!
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I can imagine her voice swelling through the hall. What will she say next?
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Thanks, Aurora. We will hear next week!
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By the pricking of my thumbs, I get a clear sense that something’s in the offing.
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Yep, Rob. It most certainly is!
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You captured this reader, my friend. This promises to be a happy ending for her.
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Thank you, Charmaine. Not quite happy, but definitely satisfied and on her own terms!
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I loved the line “…the lazy, sexy smile he usually saved for his next conquest.”
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Thank you, Paula!
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Ah, so now she has Todd’s attention. I’m so curious as to who she is introducing and what their reaction will be when they realize who she is. Such a tease! 🙂
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I’m wondering what the campaign award is, and I”m wishing I had a blurb.
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Thanks for dropping by Cara. I’ll have something for you next week 😉
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Ah, you set this scene so vividly. Can’t wait to hear her next words- I have a feeling they won’t be quite what’s expected!
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Thank you Christina!
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