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This is the third and final part of a three-part short story from my growing collection of pieces. It is called: Farmer. complete, it consists of 500 words.
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Although it was not necessary, H’rald always followed the traditional rituals of his Caste when it came to the Night of Transplanting. He ended his five-day fast with a feast of traditional dishes, redolent with the herbs and spices of his childhood. His utilitarian bathroom was transformed with the light of handmade candles and the bath was filled with a frothy mix of modern minerals and mystic herbs. He lay, submerged in the waters, allowing his recording of the ancient Chants to draw him into a deep state of meditation.
Emerging from the water, he dried off, and walked, naked, to the already prepared transplanting chamber.
Standing in the centre of the now sealed glassiform tube, H’rald felt the fine spray of decontaminant and anaesthetic on his skin. The thin mechanical arms of the transplanter emerged, making swift their incisions and insertions. A spray of sealant finished the process.
That night, H’rald dreamed of the burrowing of roots, the emergence of leaves, and the fruiting of exotic life-giving vines.
©Kim Magennis 2017
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Thank you, Kimberly The only thing that saves this from being really disturbing is the fact that he’s done it before.
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I wasn’t expecting this. Interesting turn and makes me curious about his world.
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Wow! Quite spooky. I got goose bumps reading it.
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As a lover of plants, I could put myself right into this piece. Well Done.
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Thank you, Kimberly
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The only thing that saves this from being really disturbing is the fact that he’s done it before. Still dang creepy, though! Nicely described. 🙂
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Your world building is epic!
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The excerpt drew me in at once. Well done.
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Thank you Elaine
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Well, that certainly took a turn for the weird. Love it!
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Well, that was definitely a twist. very interesting(and a little disturbing). I enjoyed following along.
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Last week I sort of wondered… Oy! What a story. I need a book of stories by Kim Magennis. 🙂
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Super creepy! And yet he seems perfectly at home with it. Great story.
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BTW, have you considered submitting this to Daily Science Fiction? They love flash and they pay well.
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Thank you Alexis, I will look into that. Much appreciated.
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He’s fertile ground?
Too horrid for my tastes.
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😉
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Interesting turn of events, the worldbuilding on this was amazing. Great (if slightly horrifying n a well done way) snippet!
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Thank you, Veronica. Much appreciated
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This is so cool. He really really loves his crops!
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He does, indeed. Thank you, Christina.
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Extraordinary tale you’ve weaved. No fodder for me, please. He’s so good
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Thank you, Charmaine
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That was fabulous. I was immediately pulled in and could visualize everything. Fantastic. Tweeted.
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Thank you kindly, Daryl. Much appreciated
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And this doesn’t kill him, obviously, as he does it every 50 days. Wow. Little Shop of Horrors on a global scale! Nicely done, Kim!
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Thank you Jenna. It is an annual crop.
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Makes me think of Soylent Green! Food for thought . . .? Nice job, Kim!
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Thank you, Nancy
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Very intriguing. Wow.
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Thank you, Cara
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Whoa. This took a turn I totally didn’t expect. Is he really about to turn himself into plant fodder?
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Yep, he sure is 🙂
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Wow, that was not at all what I expected, but I loved it! Makes me want to read another story about this world you’ve created. 🙂
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