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For the next few weeks we are sticking with Daniel Smith’s Story, which is tentatively titled “LabRat”.
BLURB: Inadvertantly ‘rescued’ (by a small admin error) seconds before committing suicide, Daniel is thrown into the Great Wide Multiverse and more adventure and misadventure than his otherwise mediocre life as a door to door vacuum cleaner salesman could prepare him for. He is assigned to the ASS ( Alien Sentience Services) and promptly given a ‘new look’ and put into ‘training’.
We last found Daniel on Bancoon, Argle’s third moon, and a scientific research centre. Daniel has spent his first day with ASS being melted.
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The irony of his situation had not escaped Daniel.
At one point, oblivion had seemed irresistibly seductive. Now, oblivion was physically impossible, and it seemed that he was going to stare at the whites of its eyes a thousand times a day, into the foreseeable future.
Even in his molten state, Daniel was acutely aware of the smooth, cooling surface under him. The acrid tang of scorched air filled the space around him. He also felt the sharp edge of the scoop as they scraped him off the floor into the bucket.
Being poured was not something he had ever expected to experience in anything equating a conscious state. It was vaguely obscene – he felt like a very large dollop of mucus that should be disposed of down a drain.
©Kim Magennis 2017
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Great snippet! Very vivid descriptions. Shuddered at that last line.
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I hope never to feel like a dollop of mucus. Wow, vivid details! Great excerpt.
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Thank you, Elizabeth!
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Very vivid descriptions and a little disturbing. Great snippet.
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Disturbing is good 🙂
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Beautifully written. 😀
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Thank you Amy
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Well, that sounds appetizing. 😛 I definitely wouldn’t want to be him!
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:-} exactly, Caitlin
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Darn. Ed beat me to the punch. Being scraped off the floor sounds so unpleasant. Almost as bad as being mucous. Yuck. Poor guy. Don’t you think it’s time to quit torturing him??? 🙂
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How gross and very cool at the same time. Nice job, Kim!
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Nice engaging of the senses. I smell what he smells, feel what he feels, and see what he can only imagine.
I’m so sorry they had to scrape him off the floor.
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Poor Daniel – he must be wondering whether suicide might have been the better option!
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This doesn’t sound like a lot of fun to me. Poor Daniel.
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The description of the process is so vivid it makes goosebumps pop on my arms. Wonderful writing.
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This is just frighteningly vivid. I thought I’d felt like a blog of mucus before, but apparently, not really. 🙂
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This is awesomely weird! But you know, being liquid sounds kind of relaxing. No muscle aches and pains.
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You are right there, Alexis!
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This is so bizarre, in all kinds of good ways and I love the feelings and thoughts you’re giving him – wow! Great excerpt.
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Thanks Veronica. Sometimes its the small things that make a story 🙂
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He must escape this position he is in and fast.
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Eventually he does, Charmaine. And he only thinks he’s having a bad time 😎
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It sounds very unpleasant! Maybe he can ooze away?
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Indeed, like a swamp monster 😝
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Ewww – but a wonderful description the mucus being dumped into a bucket. I don’t know whether to laugh or feel sorry for him. Great snippet.
Tweeted.
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Thanks, Daryl. I am glad you feel that way, it was what I was hoping to create.
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The things you come up with! It must be scary inside your head. Lol. Very creative.
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It can be quite… Interesting? Thank you Cara, I have fun at least.
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Poor guy, getting scraped up off the floor … and he didn’t even get to enjoy a wild drunken orgy the night before.
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No even close😝 Poor Daniel.
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Oh, poor Daniel. I do hope he finds a way to use this new state of being to his advantage.
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