Greetings, Weekend Writing Warriors! These are the next 10 sentences in my contemporary short story about a woman who chooses to even the score.
In answer to Cara’s comment last week: here is the first-ever blurb I have written about any of my work!
Marian undergoes a secret, 8 month long physical transformation in preparation for one event – one night: the Advertising Industry Annual Awards Event where the well-heeled and well-connected rubbed shoulders with the business-rich and ad-world-famous. As runner up to the Winning Ad Campaign, in a move which causes some surprise, she arranges to introduce the Winner, on stage, in front of everyone who is anyone in the Industry. Unrecognisably sexy and polished she meets her arch-nemesis on stage Todd Eccleston – her boss, and the architect of her misery.
Delighted with his surprise and burgeoning ‘interest’, she continues, solo, with her speech… (I have left some out – see the link below – to alleviate boredom, and the agony of anticipation :-})
“This year, there was only ever one real contender.” She smiled again. “The winner, as you will see, was exactly the right candidate for receiving such an honour.”
“Ladies and gentlemen,” the curtains behind her opened, “please watch with us, the Winning Campaign which was the brainchild of Andrea Williams and her Team.” More applause thundered across the room. She leaned forward into the microphone, and when she was certain she had everyone’s attention she said, “Please be sure to watch the credits.”
She walked off the stage, out of the wings, into the foyer, and out onto the steps of the hall.
Her limousine drew up, and she slipped into the leather-musky interior. “We will make good time for your flight, mam. Your luggage is in the boot.”
© Kim Magennis 2016
You can find the preceding text here.
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Agreed, Carl! Preferably floating in whisky!
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Oh yeah, she planned this out to the letter. This is why I always stay to the credits at the end of movies now! You never know what surprises you’ll find at the very, very, very end!
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Absolutely the very, very, very end Caitlin.
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Sorry, Amy !
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Well, that was very mysterious. I wonder what the credits will reveal?
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Interesting stuff. Definitely gets your attention, and makes you wonder what comes next.
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Wow! Win an award and leave in a limo, what a fine day she’s having! Pretty neat how this snippet coincides with the Oscars tonight.
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Hmm, I wonder if that dig on the credits will pay off later–I can’t imagine that she went through all that work for such a little reward.
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I can just see her grinning in that limo ride. Great snippet! Can’t wait to read more, loads of suspense going on.
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I’m with everybody else–can’t wait to find out what she did! Love your blurb too. 🙂
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Thanks Joyce!
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My first time to this story, but I LOVE this snippet. I want to watch the campaign and know what was in it – and I ALWAYS read the credits! =)
This entire snippet fired up my imagination big-time!
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I picture her riding in the back of the limo with a self-satisfied smile on her face.
I believe someone is about to get what credit is due. 😉
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Absolutely!
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I think I’d have waited to see the expression on his face. But, clearly she wants to escape.
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Hmmm. After what she has set in motion? It would be…. Superfluous
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But I might experiment to see just how messy it could get :-]
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ah, sweet revenge….:)
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The best!
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And the mystery continues! I could just see her striding away to the limousine. Can’t wait to learn more (and hopefully read those credits). Great snippet!
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Thank you Veronica!
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Oh! The credits! What’s in the credits???
Stellar snippet, Kim. I’m definitely hooked.
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Sweet, sweet revenge, Paula.
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Dynamite, Kim. I so love the last line where her bag is in the limo and off she goes. What a woman.
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Great snippet, Kim! Can’t wait to see what she’s up to!
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I wish our super power was to write the scripts for our own lives. I would certainly add a few more endings like this in my life
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Can’t wait to find out what was in those credits and why she had to skip town so quickly!
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Skipping town is about doing life on her terms. I’m thinking of using this as the prologue for a longer story. Who knows 😉
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How can you leave us hanging there!!!!! What’s in the credits.
Tweeted.
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Thank you Victoria! It’s just as well that I skipped the previous few sentences… Glad you are hanging in there!
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I’m guessing she left them with jaws dropping.
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So curious as to what’s going to happen with the credits, and why she left so suddenly. You certainly know how to hook a reader! Looking forward to next week! 🙂
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Thank you Jessica. All will be revealed!
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I wonder if she manipulated something about those credits. I am sure that her name will be shining.
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Next week Chelle. And its not that simple 😉
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I love the cliffhanger and can’t wait to find out what happens. Great job. I already love Marian.
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Thanks Bonnie. I wish i had her guts
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She spent 8 months preparing and then slipped away before the evening’s over? Yes, I definitely want to know what’s going on.
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Thank you Ed! That made me smile
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I wonder what is in those credits??? You’re doing a great job of keeping up the suspense, Kim! 🙂
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Thank you, Teresa! Last snippet next week!
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