Every Sunday Weekend Writing Warriors invites writers (of all shapes and sizes) to submit 8 sentences of a work or work in progress. It is a great way to put yourself out there and to connect with a vibrant and supportive community of other writers. This is my submission
#8sunday Mar 08, 2015 Annie’s Song, Erit awakens
Erit na Rakh was the first to recover. Her slender scaled form stirred. Her golden eyes sprang open as she became conscious of her surrounding. “We have arrived?” her soft voice was almost a whisper. “We have arrived,” Gravais confirmed. He helped her into a seated position and handed her a glass of restorative. Her elegant tail wrapped against her thigh and calf as she drank deeply.
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Very nice! Love the way her tail wraps around her calf. Can’t wait to see “what” she is.
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A nice moment, excellent details. Enjoyed the snippet and will be more than ready to read more of this story!
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You’ve got me trying to imagine what Erik looks like. I picture slinky and catlike.
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I like her.
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Thank you. I can’t wait for her to evolve as a character. Thanks for dropping by
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Lovely hints at the people in this story–just enough detail.
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Thank you Caitlin
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Great world-building! Very creative. You did a fantastic job of just slipping in those descriptive details! I’m intrigued.
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Thank you Teresa
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Thank you Teresa. I visited your site and failed to negotiate your comments section. So you either have 15 repeats or none. Sorry. I have a suggestion regarding the name and pronunciation, if you did not receive my message. I really enjoyed your post. thank you
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She sounds fascinating and beautiful. Nicely written.
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Thank you Patricia
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Hooked, more more
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Thank you Scott
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Nice details. I like the tail and the “restorative.”
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Thank you Cara
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Ooh,love the way you casually work in the scales and tail. Sounds like an intriguing character!
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Thank you Christina.
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Beautiful details, Kim, nicely done!
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Thank you, very much. And thank you for dropping by.
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