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Welcome to another installment of ‘Falling into that New Career’.
Daniel is not your normal hero. In fact, very far from it. Inopportunely rescued from a suicide attempt (by a 2 second admin error), he is plunged into an alternate reality, where he is supposed to be an already deceased ‘specimen’. Fortunately the workers overseeing his ‘collection’ were less than eager to change his status to that required by their paperwork, and he finds himself ‘relocated’. The only problem is, the Multiverse is a pretty big place, and he did not get returned to Earth.
His story continues in this second chapter (Falling into that New Career) of Lab Rat (this is the working title only) where he finds himself in the Alien Immigration Offices, having to complete ‘paperwork’ with his case worker Zith Grewnfarn.
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“Mr Smith, may I call you Daniel?” Another grunt, Zith placed an interrogative mark against ‘Level III sentience’. “You are currently an undocumented alien. Can you please tell me how you came to be recovered by the Shoreline Shepherds?”
Daniel rummaged through his sluggish mind. What were his options? He immediately rejected ‘making something up’ because he knew that, in his current frame of mind, it would probably end up more bizarre than the truth. So what was left? Tell the truth, and be assigned to a psychiatric facility and dosed up with anti-psychotic drugs; or pretend he couldn’t remember, and make it up as he went along.
“I can’t remember”, he mumbled, remembering only too clearly.
© Kim Magennis
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Outstanding scifi, Kim! I am still in awe of the premise. You have such an imagination!
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I have a feeling “not remembering” isn’t going to help him out too much. Can’t wait to find out what happens next.
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I love all the internal analysis he did, only to come up with a simple reply. Great writing!
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Sounds reasonable to me! Great response, says I!
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That seems like his best option. Can’t wait to find out what happens next. This is great sci-fi.
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Whew…although whether claiming not to remember will make things better or worse for him remains to be seen! Nice snippet.
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I love the “undocumented alien” remark.
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Always a safe bet to say you can’t remember.
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Glad he went with ‘I don’t remember’. Gives him time to think things through.
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Probably wise not to start in trying to lie but I have a feeling saying he can’t remember will get him in trouble too. Poor guy can’t win here! Loving the story though, great snippet.
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Uh-oh, looks like he might lose a sentience level if he sticks to his grunts and mumbles!
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Sounds like the visits I’ve made to the DMV and Social Security! I like where this story is going, Kim!
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I like the contradiction in the last lines.
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Thank you for stopping by, Aurora.
I have those running through my head often. Especially when I am trying to be ‘nice’.
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Making it up as you go along can be tricky. I always stick to the truth because I can’t remember anything else. LOL Good luck to Daniel and his improvisations! Great snippet!
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My position exactly, Jenna. Thanks for dropping by, much appreciated
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Looks like he might want to make an effort to appear a little more sentient. Great snippet!
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Indeed. He is not scoring very well on that level. Poor Daniel.
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He’s definitely in a tough spot here, but hopefully he made the right choice. Time will tell. Have to say that I LOVE the premise of this story! Can’t wait for more, Kim! 🙂
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Thank you, Julie, much appreciated. Things get fairly interesting later in this story. Let’s see how far it goes!
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What else could he say? A dilemma, indeed.
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Especially when you doubt the sanity of your experience! Sometimes it is better to play it down.
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The possibilities are endless. Your imagination is awesome, Kim. Thanks.
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Thank you, Charmaine
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Tough spot. Hopefully he won’t regret his choice!
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Oh, that definitely sounds like the best option. Great snippet! I’m anxious to read more. 🙂
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Thank you, Jessica. Much appreciated.
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I suspect his lack of forthright honesty is making more problems for himself.
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Absolutely, Ed!
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