It’s Weekend Writing Warriors time again. This is my submission.
These are the next few lines to one of my (as yet untitled) works in progress. We pick the story up a few paragraphs later. Orida has settled into her temporary accommodation and checks up on her travel-abused instrument.
#8sunday May 17 , 2015 Scott’s Story 8
A gentle chime signalled the placement of the sound-dampening field.
Released from its case and wrapping, her varvitos gleamed golden. The five hundred year old instrument was satin beneath her fingertips. She was always amazed at how warm it was to her first touch. It glowed with a life all its own somehow imbued deeply in the wooden grains. She cradled and strummed it. As she expected, it sounded sourly discordant, shaken out of its usual mellow tone by the rough entry into the planet’s atmosphere.
An hour and a half later it responded sweetly to her touch. Yet another three hours slipped away as she surrendered to its magic. Each exercise flowed from her fingers and the instrument effortlessly, with the ease of thousands of repetitions.
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Those who truly know their instruments can experience something akin to rapture when they play. You captured this feeling beautifully.
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Thank you Eden
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Magical words, Kim. So well written and truly extraordinary.
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Thank you Charmaine
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I always wanted to play an instrument as a kid, but never could get the hang of one. I love how lost she gets in the music, though!
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Thank you Caitlin
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She’s in the flow all right, beautiful description!
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Absolutely. Thank you Veronica
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Just beautiful in your description!!! Loved this, Kim!
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Thank you Sara, I feel that making music is ‘soul-stuff’, and I wasn’t sure if I could get that across.
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Great narrative, which flowed effortlessly! It drew me in!
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Thank you Frank. I have to watch that I don’t wax too lyrical ;-}
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Mmm, lovely. Really captured the joy of practicing music!
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Thank you Christina. Along with visual art, I think that making music is the sublime expression of beauty.
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Lovely description of a musician and their instrument.
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I LOVE the way she interacts with this fascinating instrument. I want more. So much more.
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Great writing, Kim! I play violin, so I can identify with Orida’s feelings towards the instrument. Is the varvitos a South African instrument or is that part of the fantasy world?
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Thank you Jean. A varvitos is ancient Grecian in origin (so my research says) and is a longer (than normal) necked lyre, which allows for a deeper more mellow sound.
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I enjoyed your evocation of the instrument’s sound and its affect on her–in fact, I wouldn’t have minded hearing more of tha!
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Thank you Ed. Music is core to her character, so she will be playing often.
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